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A Story About Us

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       This is a story about
       the possibility of
       a snowfall in L.A.
       of raindrops kissing
1     shoulders,
       and of
       how my hands
       never forgot how to
       hold yours.

       This is a story about
       it being December, but
       still sunny and 63 degrees.
       of eyelash on eyelash
2     action,
       and of
       how we said
       that we couldn't live without
       each other.

       This is a story about
       indecisive California weather
       or Climate Change.
       of frozen fingertips
3     intertwined,
       and of
       how we sometimes
       fall apart, but always fall back
       together again.

       This is a story about
       earthquakes halfway
       around the world.
       of love notes via cell
4     phones,
       and of
       how you sometimes
       make me feel like you only
       see me.

       This is a story about
       a butterfly causing
       a hurricane.
       of first kisses
5     redone,
       and of
       how I tend
       to get jealous of girls who are jealous
       of me.

       This is a story about
       the importance of it being
       a certain season disappearing.
       of hazel eyes and
6     blue,
       and of
       how my favourite
       number is seven and the stanzas in this poem
       and forever.

       This is a story about
       hot/cold, hot/cold,
       hot/cold.
       of me loving
7     you,
       and of
       how my life
       has been a decent place to
       live lately.
Because I've already told you- I'm tired of sad endings.
And because I'd like for love to be my muse instead of heartbreak.
(Even if it makes me not one of the Greats.)

This is probably the only poem I've ever written where every single word has a purpose and meaning and story behind it, and where every single line is true for me and inspired by something in my life.

And it has an obvious pattern going, but there're also little patterns weaved into the main pattern:
Lines 7-9 of 1 relate to 4/5 of 3.
4/5 of 4 relate to 7-9 of 2.
7-9 of 3 relate to 4/5 of 5.
7-9 of 4 relate to 4/5 of 6,
and etc.
and stanza 7 is magick and therefore doesn't have to follow all of the patterns.

Speaking of 7, there are 7 letters in "forever" and in "I'm naive" and in "I know it" and in "Don't G.A.F." and in "love him."

And I'd like to get to know all of the nameless, faceless people who read what I write but never say anything about it.
I'd also like to talk to the people who read it and do comment it.
It all makes me overly happy.
And I'm thankful.
:]:heart:


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EatingMyOwnFears's avatar
I love the concept and the feel. :love: